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Hiking The Inca Trail, Machu Picchu in Peru


rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
Machu Picchu is a famous sacred site touristic in Peru founded by Hiram Bingham in 1911, the name comes from Ican language which means "old peak". The Ican constructed a ceremonial city which come under palaces, temples, storage rooms, baths, and houses. They made the structure from the heavy blocks of granite and use that place as an astronomical observatory. Every single years the tourists come and enjoy the beautiful architecture. There are couples of transportation to reach there, such as bus, train or even hike along the Inca Trail. Hiking along the Inca Trail is the most favorite and adventurous way to reach there. By pass the Inca Trail, the tourists will surprise with the view of glacier-covered peaks and enjoy the beautiful scenery, vary of orchid and melodious chirping of birds. Unfortunately, since 20th century until 2005 there is no regulation to visit that tourism object which can give any bad impact to the nature. Nowadays the governments limit the tourists who visit Machu Picchu, only 200 tourist includes porters and guides who allowed to enter it. And each travel company or individual guides must have a special license. The new regulations also cover about how much the porter should be paid. And arrange the fees for trail to protect the trail and ruins.

azmi23 17 / 28 3  
Aug 25, 2016   #2
Hi rosa! here are my corrections (red) and suggestion (blue). hope you can follow through! Btw nice information! happy writing!

Machu Picchu is a famous sacred touristic site touristic in Peru founded by Hiram ...
By passing the Inca Trail, the tourists will be surprised with the breathtaking view of glacier-covered ...
... porters and guides who are allowed to enter it.
... company or individual guides must have a special license.
... how much the porter should be paid. Andand arrange the fees for ...
jomul01 14 / 14 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #3
The Ican constructed a ceremonial city which come undercompleted with palaces, temples, storage ...

They made The structure is made from the heavy blocks of granite and use that place asused for as astronomical observatory.
jomul01 14 / 14 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #4
Hi Rosa Desiana ! My apology, my previous comment is not finish yet actually, accidentally i click the "post mesage", here my full suggestion

There are couples of transportations to reach there,(...) the Inca Trail Hiking along the Inca Trail which is the most...
... the tourists will get surprised with the view of (...) the beautiful scenery, also(or you separate it into new sentence) vary of orchid and ...

Unfortunately, since from 20th century untilto 2005, there is no regulation (...) object which can give any bad impact to the nature leads to natural damage. Nowadays the governments has limited the tourists who visit Machu Picchu, there is only 200 tourist includes ...

And(dont using too much "and")
And Furthermore, this regulation arranges the fees for trail to ...


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