Initially, going to traditional school, students not only learn lecture, but also learn how to socialize.
Good point! But let's not say 'initially.' It makes it confusing. Let's not even do things like "firstly" "secondly" and so on. Just let your topic sentences stand alone.
Initially Going to traditional schoo
ls, students learn not only information but also learn how to socialize.Furthermore, studying at home has some disadvantages. For instance, students won't have a...
This is just like 'for example'
Furthermore, studying at home has some disadvantages. For example, students won't have a...
Therefore, they might not able to focus on their studies.
or
Therefore, they might not able to focus on studying.
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