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Household power - IELTS writing task 1, diagram

yswt0221 1 / -  
Jan 1, 2021   #1

The picture illustrates the viable household power production in the future.

It is obvious that, there are 6 stages for the process of generating home use electricity while the most essential part will be the two tank, which are the composting tank and methane gas storage tank, the process also include the usage of a compressor, combustion engine, generator and battery.The size of the all parts of the electricity production is taller than a person.

The first stage involves the decomposition of domestic trash and water in the composting tank, then methane gas will be generated, it will be transferred into the storage tank. Next, the methane gas will be compressed through the compressor and will be delivered to the combustion engine which turns the methane gas into mechanic energy. This energy then will be converted to electrical energy by the generator which will ultimately stored into battery for home use.

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Jan 1, 2021   #2
Post the image to go with your task next time. I require it for a proper and complete review of your data report. I will do what I can in terms of a general review, but do not expect an intricate review as that cannot be done without the image that accompanied the task.

The summary overview should be longer than one sentence. This should have at least 3 descriptive sentences within it, including the trending statement. You will lose valuable TA points when you present such an incomplete summary. It could actually make you fail the test from the very beginning.

Since there are 6 steps in the process of creating home electricity, the succeeding explanatory paragraphs need to be composed of 3 procedures / steps each. Each one supporting the explanation of the process, why it is important, and how it helps usher in the next stage of the energy production process. I am basing this on a general reference point, without having seen the image. This is why the supplying of the image is required for these practice essays. I cannot assess if you are working within the given instructions or not. I can only assume things without it.
Tai351 2 / 4  
Jan 1, 2021   #3
Add a picture next time, it would be easier for others to understand your writing. Usually, when the question ask you to describe a process, go more specifically with each steps, this will help your writing to have a better structure as well as to have enough words required.
bumblebee123 1 / 2  
Jan 6, 2021   #4
Don't forget to post pictures with this type of writing task. Besides, I think you should paraphrase the question first,

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