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Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting - essay


stn0795 4 / 11  
Apr 5, 2012   #1
I feel I got too many grammar in my essay. Can you please help?

Houston is not a Best Place to Visiting
Every country has at least a state or city for tourist its culture and traditions. Once the tourist plan to visiting US, they will think about California, New York, Nevada, Washington, or Florida. There are few tourist think about they will visit Houston, Texas unless they have relationships who are living in Houston, Texas.

I think United State government knows Houston is not a good place to developing a best resource for sightseeing. First, geography of Houston locates about 70 miles from Galveston beach. However, the Galveston beach water see is not clean and clear as other place. There is only a Movie Garden at Galveston is not enough to attract the tourist. Second, Houston weather is too inclement. Summer time temperature is always above 90 Fahrenheit degree which make people just want to stay in-door with AC. Winter time temperate never drop down under 30 Fahrenheit degree. However, windy and raining cause piercingly cold. Finally, due to not many tourists visiting, government does not build out many entertainment or place for tourist. Therefore, people seem could not learn how to treat outside of city customers.

In conclusion, Houston is not a very good place for long vacation. You can have a short tour to Houston to learn or understand about Houston, Texas culture, weather, people, or you can visit NASA if you like scientist.

Thanks,
Son

avenged7fold - / 4  
Apr 5, 2012   #2
Houston is not a Best Place to Visitingthe best place to visit or not the best place for visiting.
Every country has at least aone state or city for touristshowcasing its culture and traditions to tourists . Once the tourist plan to visiting USWhen one beings to plan about visiting the US , they will he would undoubtedly think about California, New York, Nevada, Washington, or Florida. There are few touristfew would think about they will visiting Houston, Texas unless they have relationships relatives who are living in Houston, Texas.

I think United State government knows Houston is not a good place tofor developing athe best resource for sightseeing. First, geography of Houston is located about 70 miles from Galveston beach. However, the Galveston beach water theresee is not as clean and clear as in other places . There is only a A single Movie Garden at Galveston is not enough to attract the tourists . Second, Houston weather is too inclement. Summer time temperature is always above 90 Fahrenheit degree which makes people just want to stay in-door with AC. Winter time temperate never drops down under 30 Fahrenheit degree. However, windy and raining cause piercingly coldthe wind and rain can make it piercingly cold . Finally, due to not many tourists visitingthe low number of incoming tourists , the government does not build out many entertainment or placeplaces designated for tourists . Therefore, the people seem could notunable to learn how to treat outside of cityout-of-city customers.

In conclusion, Houston is not a very good place for long vacations . You can have a short tour to Houston to learn or understand about Houston, Texas culture, weather, people, or you can visit the NASA if you like scientistscience .
OP stn0795 4 / 11  
Apr 5, 2012   #3
Thanks Auguste and Avenged7fold!

Son
jawad noah 1 / 4  
Apr 5, 2012   #4
Hi,

I just have one suggestion that i hope it helps :

"I think the United States government knows ..."

sincerely
OP stn0795 4 / 11  
Apr 9, 2012   #5
Thanks, Jawad!


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