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Humanities summarizing paper

mandymoore 10 / 1  
Oct 21, 2007   #1
this is the humanities summarizing paper. And my teacher wanted me to use at least one quote using MLA form. Could check all of it? is it make sense?. I need this before 9pm. thanks

"In the eleventh century, after a long period of desolation and warfare, Europe began to stir with new life." After a long time of waste and fighting, European renaissance started. A large number of crusades who did not believe in the Christianity began to travel in all over the Europe at that time. In XI-XII century, construction work was accomplished by monks and under Romanesque's instruction. Romanesque was the natural talented and Roman architecture. They built fabulous, valuable and historical church and monastery. Romanesque used a lot of specific design to build such as heavy stone, exterior decoration, and sculpture. All works were done by not only advantages and but also accidental disadvantages which is wooden part were easy to catch the fire.

From the floor to the root, all things had their own special meanings. They finally succeeded by extremely hard work force. In my opinion, one of the important thing they were trying to show us was, the people who don't believe the God, they would suffer misfortune in one day. And also they attempted to lead `gospel to everybody in the world.

EF_Team2 1 / 1,708  
Oct 22, 2007   #2

We try to answer all posts within 24 hours, but can't guarantee sooner, sorry! I hope some comments will still be helpful to you.

When you say "construction work was accomplished by monks and under Romanesque's instruction" you make it sound as if "Romanesque" was a person. It was a style of art and architecture, not a person or group of people, so when you say "they" it is not clear to whom you are referring.

I hope this helps!


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swbfvd92 - / 1  
Apr 26, 2012   #3
Need Help with Topics for Humanities Essay

I have to write an 4-6 page essay about the quote "Without freedom, no art; art lives only in the restraints it imposes on itself, and dies of all others." By Albert Camus

I have started an Intro but I can not think of three to four topics to talk about in my body section?

Any help will be appreciated.
faithcarson 1 / 4  
Apr 26, 2012   #4
I would love to help you because this sounds like an interesting essay topic, however I am unclear as to what you mean. Please expand a bit more and I will be glad to help.

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