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Humans today kill the Earth through garbage - it is a worldwide problem.


phamhaitb 1 / -  
May 15, 2019   #1

Our planet covered by rubbish



It is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem. What do you think are the main causes of this situation? What measures used to tackle?

Rubbish is created by humans all over the world, which is gradually increasing, especially over the last decades. Although a myriad of reasons and methods is provided by activists and scientists, the problem has become a global issue, which should be solved as soon as possible.

There is an abundance of reasons for this issue is a global problem. Firstly, a huge amount of trash is one of the major reasons causes environmental problems such as air pollution and climate change nowadays. For example, since burning plastic and chemical rubbish creates a huge amount of carbon dioxide, which is emitted directly into the air which contributes to global problems including air pollution. Moreover, if rubbish is dumped into the river systems, it will destroy the marine animal system there. For instance, by throwing trash, such as plastic bag and non-recyclable trash, away to the river system, which causes death to many fish and other aquatic animals.

Today, some measures are now used to combat this problem. The most effective way to fight climate change is reducing the dependence on plastic bags and other rubbish in general. This could be using paper bags and another kind of recyclable material instead of plastic, which reduces rubbish is created by humans. Furthermore, since alleviate environmental problems is caused by rubbish, we can collect trashes and use alternative energy sources.

Trash and issues surrounding it is a global problem, which impacts on every person all over the world. I believe that to decrease the greenhouse effects people should be aware of tackle environmental problems.

Brenna Vo 2 / 3 1  
May 15, 2019   #2
hi @phamhaitb
there are some mistakes you should pay more attention to such as:
... of reasons for this issue is a global problem, ( reason for sth/doing sth).
... of the major reasons causes ( causing)
... directly into the air which contributes (contributing) to ...

Today, some measures are now used to ... The most effective way to fight climate change ( irrelevant word) is reducing ( to reduce) ... which reduces rubbish is created by humans ( which is created by humans).

You should review some grammar structures like relative clauses, compound and complex sentences


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