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TOEFL iBT- More important to study mathematics or literature?


mahrou 16 / 14  
May 4, 2011   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for student to learn to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Many people believe that study of history and literature is more important for students than study mathematics and other sciences. But I believe that students should learn about both of these fields because as they need to learn sciences and mathematics as to history and literature. Thank to they need spending some time to increase their information about their country or other parts of the world and dealing with literature to feed their soul. In fact, the education of students not should be limited to mathematics and science. Here I enumerate some of my reasons for this argument.

Students should learn many sciences such as chemistry, biology, mathematics, and so forth because they want to continue their educations in future in one of these fields. Also, they want to do activity or research in this area to improve the science and create more convenient life for people by some achievements. On the other hand, they should learn about their culture, ancestors, and many important historical events which had occurred in their countries or in any corner of the world. So, they should study in history and literature too.

Moreover, study the science and mathematics alone cause to tire the student's mind and lose their motivations to study such lessons. Furthermore, they need study some amazing subjects near these lessons. Indeed, study of literature and mathematics always is interesting for students and they enjoy from doing that.

Additionally, many students have incredible talents in the literature aspects such as poem, writing Romans or other styles, while they don't like to solve the mathematic questions or research in laboratories. So, by learning some lessons in the literature subjects in their school, they can find their real interest and follow it as one of their activities or as their major job in future.

All in all, by noticing to my statements I mentioned above, I believe that teaching literature and history besides study in mathematics and other sciences can be trained the complete students in future. Also, they can find the better field which more compatible with their personalities.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
May 5, 2011   #2
Hi,

ManySome people believe that study of history and literature is more important for students than study mathematics and other sciences... "I think the word "some" better justifies your idea".

But I believe that students should learn about both of these fields because asthey need to learnlearning sciences and mathematics is as toimportant as learning history and literature.

Thank to they need spending some time to increase their information about their country or other parts of the world and dealing with literature to feed their soul. ----- This sentence has some issues; grammer, clarity etc. I guess what you want to say is;

History is important for a person to be well informed about what happened in the past that helps him develop a better insight about the world and society while literature plays an important role in developing one's communication and easthetic capabilities.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
May 6, 2011   #3
"I think the word "some" better justifies your idea".

Very clever, Duminda, I had not thought of that!

History is important for a person to be well informed about what happened in the past; that helps him develop a better insight about the world and society, while literature plays an important role in developing one's communication and easthetic aesthetic capabilities.

Again, very cool... I added a semi-colon, a comma, and I corrected a typo.

Moreover, the study of science and mathematics alone tires the student's mind and they lose their motivation to study such lessons.

Furthermore, they need study some amazing subjects near during these lessons.

Indeed, study of literature and mathematics always is interesting for students and they enjoy from doing that. the time they spend.

All in all, by noticing to my statements I in consideration of the points I mentioned above, I believe that teaching literature and history besides study in mathematics and other sciences should be part of a complete education. Also, they can find a field which is more compatible with their personalities.

:-)
bahareh 18 / 50  
May 6, 2011   #4
Hi;
So, they should study in history and literature too.... try not using so at the begining the sentence.

Moreover, study the science and mathematics alone cause to tire the student's mind and lose their motivations to study such lessons....I think this sentences needs a little bit of change...

Morover, studing the science and mathematices as the only subjects makes students feel bored and less motivated.
bahareh


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