Personally I think paying tax is obligatory to every individual.I personally believe that every individual is obliged to pay taxes to the government.
Anyways, good introduction!
Basically, the idea of a tax-free country has drawn the interest of few people.
I like if you didn't have this sentence. The next sentence is a good one to start with your body para.
First of all, citizens think keeping the money they earned helps improve their life conditions.First of all, people wish to retain their hard earned money with them in hope of enhancing their living standard.
Basically, the idea of a tax-free country has drawn the interest of few people. First of all, citizens think keeping the money they earned helps improve their life conditions. In other words, the money exempted from tax is useful for upgrading one's house, buying new clothes for kids or having more food for the meals. Another reason is that they do not believe that the tax is spent on appropriate reasons. As an example, the American went string back and asked the money back when the government spent a great deal of the budget on the Iraq war. Hence, keeping the money comes as a safe choice for many people.
You have too many reasons in this para. It is good if you limit one reason per body para.