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IELST Writing Task 1 - Water use worldwide and water consumption


jeawon_198x 1 / -  
Jul 22, 2013   #1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.


Global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000


The line graph illustrates the amount of global water used in Agriculture, Industrial use and Domestic use from 1900 to 2000. In general, there is diffrence in the consumption among these sectors.

To specify, the amount of global water used in Agriculture was highest with almost 3000 km3 in 100 years. Following that, the amount of global water in Industrial use was lesser nearly 2 times than the amount of those in Agriculture , about 1400 km3 . The lowest amount of global water consumption was about 400 km3 belonged to Domestic use.

Turning to the table , there is a slightly difference in water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. With 176 milion citizens and 26,500 km2 of irrigated land, Brazilian consumed 359 m3 water per person in 2000. Meanwhile, dramatically lesser than Brazil in population and irrigated land( 5.2 million and 100km2, respectively), Democratic Republic of Congo has only 8 m3 water consumption per person in that year.




dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Jul 22, 2013   #2
First, I want to request you to post all your IELTS essays into Writing Feedback forum :)

The line graphs illustrates the amount of global water used infor Agriculture, Industrial use and Domestic use from 1900 to 2000.

... there are two line graphs in the first diagram.
The line graphs illustrate the use of global water during the period of 1900 to 2000, for the three sectors such as Agriculture, Industrial use and Domestic use.

How about the other table? You need to introduce that too here.


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