I can see a few grammar mistakes.
Is it more important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pay well?
It is good to chose work that one finds fulfill than one that pay well, because when you're working where you relax, and fulfill even though they have to pay well.
This sentence is not clear enough. Fulfillment is not completely about relaxing.I think it is better to find work that is fulfilling than one that pays well.
I agree with you. But it is important to maintain a delicate balance between them. Because in the modern world it is find to hard a job which is both fulfilling and that pays your rent.
But overall I think you have presented good facts.