Making ourselves aware about current news in the world is the need of an hour. World is changing very fast.
Ana, I like to say two things. First, I find most of your writing very indirect like the first sentence here. Second, you are using
same sentence structure in majority of your writing. It makes monotonus. Add some colors in writing. How? I will give example; you can connect the first and second sentence,As world is changing very fast, making ourselves aware about current news is the need of an hour.I told earlier that your first sentence is indirect. It does not give enough PUNCH or strength to your saying. how about writing it differently, for example;It is the need of an hour to make ourselves aware about current news.Just an idea!This helps us to find out what is good and what is bad for us ( it is better to say ; it keeps us updated and enhance our knowledge) . Knowing about current news and events helps us in manyfollowing ways.
Firstly, as a student, takinglistening current news is thea part of my study, because general knowledge is the common subject of many competitive exams, entrance exams, and interviews. We have to be familiar with all the events happening around us. It is not only helps in our study, but also in our personal life. For example, technology has developed a lot and is furtherdevelopingadvancing day by day. Daily news advanced technologies are introduced by inventors . We must have knowledge about these new inventions. News introduce us to such new technologies Computer and internet is the best invention of the century (do you think this sentence is necessary here) . Knowledge about these helps us in our day to day life. For example, if we want to buy a new laptop and we know which one is best and advanced then, we can decide quickly which one to buy.
In addition, competition has increased ( you mean advanced or changed ?) .
I have some suggestion about the topic. your reason is based on onlu one points. you can add some more reasons like;# news makes us aware what is going on in other area of the world. We can schedule, modify our travel plans or vacation watching news.
if there is bad weather or natural calamities going on or unsafe to travel etc.
# Knowing things makes us smart. It helps in social interaction and academic performance.