A properly analyzed task 1 essay must be completed within 20 minutes and between 175 - 200 words. Though there won't be deductions applied for writing more words, I am afraid that such a practice results in more scoring errors for the student. That is because your focus moves from the proper TA, L R, C + C, and GRA scoring guidelines to merely writing as much words as possible. Quality writing is more important than word count because you are scored on the former and not the latter.
Here is an example of your L.R. mistake:
the number of crimes who were thrown in jail
Word usage error based on improper vocabulary /word meaning.
Crimes - noun; an action or an instance of negligence that is deemed injurious to the public welfare or morals or to the interests of the state and that is legally prohibited. Root word: Crime (singular )
Criminal - noun ; a person guilty or convicted of a crime. Criminals (plural)
Based on the word definitions alone, you can already tell what and how you made the mistake. This is why you should with just the right number of words, to ensure you can check for, and correct score related errors.
nations'
GRA error in relation to punctuation usage. You do not need to use an apostrophe in this word. It signifies the plural form and ownership without that mark. Review punctuation usage rules.
As for your TA issues:
five different countries
Which are ? Summarise the countries listing for an accurate TA consideration.
thrown in jail
Indicate the measurement used which is by the thousands
50-year period starting from 1930
Ending in what year? complete the half century reference data.
The report is acceptable but the number of mistakes in it are not. The number of avoidable errors could prevent the awarding of a passing score. It is about information clarity based on scoring guidelines. Not just the word count.