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How to improve photography skills on your phone


bbcheesecake14 10 / 13  
Aug 18, 2016   #1
To take a nice picture with smartphone camera is not hard as you thought, but a very common problem is forgetting to focus. Few people who know to use manual focus, they think that auto focus is the best way to get a perfect photo. Every professional photographer is rarely use auto focus, due the fact that auto focus will fails and make your picture blurry.

Never use flash when you taking a photo, even with improved flash setting that are being implemented into smartphones. And also not ever use digital zoom because it lowers the quality of your photos. If your object is moving, you had better to use burst mode, it can multiple photos rapidly and helps you to getting focus.

But if you cannot take that perfect looks originally, you can improve it digitally such as editing. Editing will help you to setting the brightness, contrast, framing, and many more.
riaerizal11 3 / 5  
Aug 18, 2016   #2
dear @bbcheesecake14,
here are some corrections for your essay.

let me start from the first paragraph,
i think you need to reform the structure of your leading sentence make it more coherent so your text will sounds better.

besides, i dont think i am good enough with grammar so i would only mention a few grammatical errors that i am sure of.

(only a ) few people who know (how ) to use manual focus,
due (to ) the fact that auto focus will fails and make your picture blurry.
when you (are ) taking a photo
even with improved flash setting that are being implemented into smartphones

i guess that's all from me. hope it would be helpful.
goodluck with your IELTS preparation :)


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