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Even with improved access to education, a significant number of adults today remain illiterate. What



thanhdan00 2 / 1  
Jul 18, 2026   #1
Even with improved access to education, a significant number of adults today remain illiterate. What challenges do adults who cannot read or write face?What steps can governments take to support illiterate adults? Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.

In today's world, even with greater access to quality education, adult illiteracy still remains a pressing problem. This essay will first examine challenges that these individuals encounter before proposing practical measures to effectively address these consequences.

On the one hand, there are several challenges that the illiterate population faces in modern society. Chief among these lies within employability. As those who lack basic fundamental literacy skills are effectively locked out from higher education, which in turn deprive them from having any meaningful opportunities to acquire job-ready skills and specialized knowledge needed in today's competitive job market. Consequently, illiterate adults are largely confined to low-skill occupations, such as labour work, informal trades, or cleaning jobs with limited career prospects, thereby limiting their chances of acquiring stable employment and adequate monthly remunerations. The second challenge extends into the realm of financial and physical safety. In South Asia, for instance, moneylenders have been widely known to offer illiterate borrowers contracts with illegal terms hiding within, making them effectively trapped in the cycle of debts they neither understood nor agreed to. This stems from the fact that these individuals could not verify between legitimate contracts and exploitative ones. By the same token, the inability to read dosage instructions or medical warnings could cause accidental self-harm. In this sense, illiteracy does not merely limit opportunity, it actively strips adults of tools needed to protect themselves from harm.

To effectively counter adult illiteracy, both government and businesses could adopt two targeted solutions, each corresponding with problems outlined above. At the forefront of these measures is the integration of education in the workplace. Governments should introduce flexible, work-compatible literacy and vocational training programmes such as evening classes, employer courses, and online learning modules to allow adults to build literacy and marketable skills. Since excessive working hours is a single biggest obstacle, integrating instruction directly into the workplace, rather than expecting adults to learn externally, would significantly improve participation and completion rates. Over time, such programs would convert an untapped portion of the workforce into a more skilled, productive one, thereby driving economic booms. Secondly, to address the financial and safety risks that illiterate adults face, governments could mandate plain-language formats in legal contracts, loans agreements and medical labels, while still funding communities with free literacy services where illiterate adults could have contracts explained to them before signing. Such measures would directly address predatory lending and medication misuse identified before, without adults to fully finish literacy.

In light of these considerations, the illiterate population will face both unstable employment and personal safety that largely stems from limited access to education and reliable literacy services. However, with plain-language formats and the educational integration in the workplace, they could be equipped with both skills and the safeguards needed to participate fully in today's society.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16133  
Jul 26, 2026   #2
Okay. The essay that you wrote is too long. You only have 40 minutes to write this paper in a high quality manner. You won't pass the test if you deliver an open ended essay, which is what will happen in this case. Additionally, you are scored not on the length of your essay but on the quickness of your clear explanation, within 4 to 5 paragraphs of 5 sentences each. I cannot accurately judge your ability to pass the test based on this writing as it doesn't follow the required word count of 300 maximum, 250 minimum. It would be best for you to write another essay within the appropriate word count and then come back here for a proper review and maybe, I will throw in sectional scoring assumptions as well.


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