An increasing temperature on the planet can have domino-falling effects for the future of Earth

TED Summary : New Thinking On The Climate Crisis

An increasing temperature on the planet can have domino-falling effects for the future of Earth. Wide-spread changes in the Earth's climate. Ecological changes would mark the extinction of many types of species. With ecological changes, the ripple effect starts trickling closer to home. With ecosystems failing, our own environment becomes threatened. Not since the rise of the Industrial Revolution, has climate change been so rampant. In 2005, the US released 6.1 billion tonnes of carbon dioxide into the sky that is equal to 1.2 billion elephants, it is time to stop ignoring the 1.2 billion elephants in the room. Gasoline consumption the developing country was following developed country. So give a technology for developing country to build up to be great nations. For example put a price on carbon in developing country. Solutions renewable energy is often the best way to bring electricity to places that do not have it, second emissions trading is bringing new resources to sustainable development, the last reforestation programs can support rural livelihoods.

Hi Riandi, as I go through your essay, I must say you know exactly how to approach or answer the essay, that is in you own language, however, not in the English language, especially in accordance to the language rules. You have incomplete sentences that does not help in the overall impact of the essay. To further elaborate this observation, please find a few suggestions and remarks below;

- have domino-falling effects for the future of the Earth. - Wide-spread changes are observed in the Earth's climate.

- Gasoline consumption thein developing countrycountries was following developed country.
- So giventhe technology for developing
- For example put a price on carbon ... - what do you mean by this sentence?

- Solutions on renewable energy is often
- ... bring electricity to places that does not have it,

There you have it Riandi, you need a lot of practice in sentence construction, it will also help if you read a lot in order to widen your vocabulary,this will help with your sentence construction. Keep writing.