The essay is only 221 words. I am afraid that the wordcount deduction will be difficult for your work to overcome. This essay is immediately a strong contender for a failing score. Always bear in mind that the word minimum is 250 and provide that count as your least written word number.
Prompt individual and ...forests from vanishing.
These are not solutions to the problem. So, you did not respond to the direct question as required. The essay is nowmissing a thesis sentence.
Fundamentally, trees play an essential then form acid rain...
You have gone off base in terms of discussion instructions. This whole paragraph is unrelated to the discussion task. There should only be 2 paragraphs explaining your proposed solutions. 1 paragraph per solution.
Unfortunately this presentation fails to satisfy the prompt and scoring requirements in several ways. It is a failed discussion presentation