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IELTS ; Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society - write an intro?


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Dec 3, 2013   #1
Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

please help me to write an introduction for this essay. it is very difficult for me to write a good introduction for this, my ielts exam with in 10 days.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Dec 3, 2013   #2
Well.... I have helped you to write the introduction in one of your previous threads (I provided the structure for you) Let's follow that structure and construct this introduction;

Greed and selfishness are very dominant features in the modern society that leave many negative effects on people and the world at large. (this is your hook)

Because of this phenomenon, some people believe that we should return to our traditional value system which had a more prominent place for the family and the local community ----------- this is the background of your issue

I too agree with this view and believe it is the best way to live in peace and harmony. .... your opinion ( it can be otherwise if you hold the opposite opinion)

So, put these lines together and make up your introduction.


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