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There are many industries that have to cut down the trees to fulfill their materials


gldvn 2 / -  
Oct 10, 2016   #1
ENVIRONMENTAL IMPACTS OF LOGGING

There are many industries that have to cut down the trees to fulfill their materials for producing. Nevertheless, this step will be a bad effects and become enviromental problems for others life. The environmental problems; such as habitat loss, damage of air and water, and the change on general weather conditions; will be affected to other ecosystems because they cutting down a slot of trees.

Trees are become a home for many plants to protect them from rainfall and makes them to stay healthy. Tree roots also maintain the soil to keep it from erosion. The main factors of logging-related soil issue comes from the industrialized activity. Not only animals and plants that feels the impact, but fish and other ecosymstems that living in the water will be affected too. When the erosion flows into the rivers or streams, the natural matter inside it devours more oxygen, which can prompt oxygen exhaustion in the water, killing fish and others life.

Trees are a natural protection againts air pollution, which they can remove carbon dioxide and change it with oxygen and become a filter pollutants. With a healthy ecosystem, the soil will moisturized by the trees and move it into the atmosphere when they give shade to diminish vaporization. In this way, deforestration by some companies influences precipitation scheme, prompting flooding and in addition dry spell and backwoods fires.

Forests are an indispensable common reesource with broad biodiversity and incomparable wildlife living spaces. More capable logging practices would guarantee that they are ensured for future life.
PHA2016 39 / 62 4  
Oct 10, 2016   #2
Hello gldvn,

The main factors of logging-related soil issue ...

Not only animals and plants that which feels the impact...

... protection againts air pollution, which that they can remove carbon ...

With a healthy ecosystem, the soil will be moistured by the trees and ...

hope these help
sasariri 17 / 25  
Oct 10, 2016   #3
Hi Goldvina..
Your writing is increadible.
Let me give you some advice...

Trees are become a home for many plants ...

... againts air pollution, which as a filter pollutants, they can remove (...) change it with oxygen and become a filter pollutants .
... the soil will moistured moisturize by the trees ...

Good Job.
I hope it is helpful


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