Hi, irfan727, I am pursuing IELTS just like you. Some grammar errors are pointed , hoping to help you. Cheers
prominent
Colour has
a prominent role in designing.
Because of this,
the using
of colour has to
be appropriate in
severalthe decoration of buildings ...
In addition, it can encourage
s patients to become healthier.
In the beginning, stress
due(prep not a verb) tomight be attributed to the work environment. Stress from long working time
work which is too long will affect
topeople's physical and psychological health
problems .
... Wright, a fame psychologist
s , states that using red ...
... managers reckon that health
y recovery can only be
doneaddressed by a medical way.
... have a significant effect on the
comfortable(adj)comfort of patients' healing process.