An info about vehicles utilizing in Edmonton and some society reasons for using a car in the town.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart presents the information about vehicles utilize in Edmonoton, and the table shows the society reasons for using the car in town. Overall, the greatest vehicle use are car. It can also seen that the most cocieties' reasons use the car are for commute to work.

The most utilizing transport are car, representing at nearly a half of all vehicles. At 35%, Light Rail Transit are the second most popular transport. While using the bus and taxi have the smallest number at one in ten for both of them.

The majority people's reasons for usage the car is for commute to occupation are more than half, followed basis by using for business are more than two fifths. Next, inhabitants basis for using the car are taking for childrean at 40%. Interestingly, inhabitants reasons in the large city utilizing to pleasure such as shophing and leisure time have the smallest number for all of reasons are less than fifth respectively.

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The pie chart presents the information about vehicles utilize in Edmono ton, and the table shows the society reasons for using the car in town. Overall, the greatest vehicle use are car. It can also seen that the mos cocietiest' reasons use the car are for commute to work.

MY SUGGESTION:
THE PIE CHART GIVES INFORMATION TYPE OF TRANSPORT USED IN EDMONTON AND THE TABLE SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF REASON USING THEIR CAR. OVERALL, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT, THE MOST FAMOUS TYPE OF TRANSPORT IS CAR AND IS USED FOR COMMUTE WORK

Hi Wiwik, some corrections may be could help you, here:

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