Instrument that we always hear everyday and everytime is the human voice

How to speak so that people want to listen

Instrument that we always hear everyday and everytime is the voice of humans. But a lot of the situations where the time to talk others do not listen. There are seven factors in speaking and this should be left. The first factor is gossip, the second is judging, the third is negativity, the fourth is complaining, the fifth is excuss, the second least is lying, as well as the least is dogmatism. On the other side, there are four positive thing for the foundation when people speak. Usually can reduce with HAIL.

H is honesty => by clear and straight.
A is authenticity => be yourself.
I is integrity => be your word.
L is love => wish them well.

There are tools that can increase the ability to speak consist of register is know about voice that be used, timbre is know voice that sounds like, ritme, speed of sound, inflection, volume of voice.

hi..
It is a good essay of yours.
I have some suggestion..

But[However,] a lot of the situations where the time to talk [to] others do not listen[is not listened] .
>> It will be more formal when you do not use 'but' as the firts sentence opener. You can use however, nevertheless, etc
>> be aware of passive voice

thanks..
I hope it helps..

hii.. Fira28
let me give you some suggestion


you should pay more attention between modifier and head in a noun phrase, if a modifier describes a plural, the head should also be in a plural.


it is better for you to make and in your last examples

hope this helps,
thanks