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Interacting with the same kind of people in work on a regular basis


pacha 1 / 4  
Aug 27, 2009   #1
what are the quality of good coworker?

Llamapoop123 7 / 442  
Aug 27, 2009   #2
I like coworkers that are easy to interact with rather than ones who work work work. They should be your good friend in and out of work.
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Aug 27, 2009   #3
What does your question have to do with essay writing? Do you have to write an answer to this question in essay format? If so, you should brainstorm your own answer to this question and post a draft here so that we can help you formulate your own ideas.
lol 2 / 13  
Aug 27, 2009   #4
I think a coworker should be nice, easy to work with, and helpful
EF_Simone 2 / 1,986  
Aug 27, 2009   #5
I think this is an essay question for one of the standardized tests of English proficiency. And Sean is right: You should brainstorm your own ideas and then try to put them into some sort of order. We can help you after you have done at least that much yourself.
lizzye71 - / 1  
Aug 28, 2009   #6
I think a good co-worker must be a team player, reguardless of what the relationship consists of outside the work place. One must have the skill of being able to separate the personal life and the job.
OP pacha 1 / 4  
Sep 23, 2009   #7
toefl essay what are the qualities of good coworker.

Many people think that we go to work to earn a pay check. To a certain extend that is true. But when we work forty hours a week interacting with the same kind of people on regular basis, then we have a right to expect them. Therefore, in my opinion a good coworker should be cooperative, responsible and not be racist.

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Jin 11 / 37  
Sep 23, 2009   #8
Many people think that we go to work to earn a pay check. To a certain extend (extent) that (it is better) is true. But when we work (for) forty hours a(per) week interacting with the same people on regular basis, we have a right to expect them. Therefore, in my opinion a good coworker should be cooperative, responsible and not be racist.

Your logic here is a bit odd, the last sentence is so sudden... but you have a clear idea about what you will say in your essay, which is good.
OP pacha 1 / 4  
Sep 23, 2009   #9
Hi, jin thank you for your replay. My writing is very weak. please give me some advice.
Jin 11 / 37  
Sep 24, 2009   #10
pacha

i dont think it is bad for toefl exam. from your essay, you always use the word " coworker", I am nor so sure of this word, or you mean co-worker???

First of all, a co-worker should be cooperative and helpful with other co-workers (ones) when they need help. Helping each other is very necessary in a team work or an individual work(why?). We can finish our work very fast in less period of time and make more task. (maybe it is better to use efficiently) Moreover, things will not work (accomplished)if workers do not share their abilities(how can ability to be shared ) with each other. For example, if my co-worker knows some thing else, it is good to share knowledge. I always have good attitude and open minded to learn new things. (sounds awkward )Thus, be cooperative with other colleagues and sharing the experience is(are) very important for an ideal co-worker.

Secondly, being responsible is also the(a) essential character of a colleague because it means that you really care about your job and working environment. only a responsible workers can make a quick and right decision. In addition, they also have the ability to handle the small problems which appears in every day(general) work.

This part can be accentuated.

Most importantly, a good co-workers should not be racist. In todays' world people have realized that skin and feature have nothing to do with one's capabilities. Therefore, a good co-workers should be kind hearted and positive minded since, the environment in most big companies are multi culture. Moreover, a co-workers should be fun loving and humorous because friendly and jolly people are liked by everyone. Consequently, a good co-worker should not judge people by skin and always be friendly with other co-workers.

Personally, I think it is a bit far from your topic, maybe you'd better talk about some general situation. Or you can regard it as your minor idea.

In conclusion, we all spend most of our time with co-workers during the week. Therefore, a co-worker should be helpful, aptitude and not be narrow minded. It is important that our co-workers should be the people we can get along with.


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