Internet and food - has it improved the way people live?

Question:

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.

Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Answer:

Food preparation has become one of our daily routines, not for its need, but for the of preparing it. That help people to improve their life and used up the rest of the time for doing otherthings can be benificial for them.

Firstly, the new technology it the most element are making easy with the home appliance. It can help people to doing several things at the same time without staying to control it, because they are a defined parameters in the begining of the operation.

For example, for cooking a pie, putting all ingredients and mixing it, and the last operation that take more time it to bake it. At this time, i can doing other activities.

Secondly, there are easy food to prepare that we buy half coocked. Its help people to eat quickely when they haven't time because of their time working, studying,...

At the end, internet make available a of of websites with different recipes to prepare in a short time without experimental phase.

All this arguments can help peple to not spend more time, and improve their productivity, learning more and doing activities.

but for the....of preparing it

and used up the rest of the

Firstly, the new technology it the most element are making easy ... ????

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