In recent years, the Internet has boomed and played a vital role in our lives. It is believed that the Internet has become the most powerful
methodtools to enhance humankind's life . However, besides the benefits of the Internet, some people statethink that it also contains many latent threatsnegative effects (The word "threats" was used in the topic. For this reason I replaced it with a synonym) toon the society. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
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People from over the world can easily keep in touch with others. Information is updated for a moment, not required too much time and money. Apparently the Internet helps correspondence is easier, faster and cheaper.
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Because social network
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BecauseA large number of social networks and a large amount of websites can jeopardize strongly develop worldwide, our private information is put in a vulnerable situation in consequence of a loose management.
Besides, the Internet makes a potential environment for frauds through providing online sale service
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