Hello Yurike,
answered 27 questions which repetitive IS REPEATING / REPEATS / IS REPETITIVE of the previous (...) from Indonesian'S police because his ...
1. WHICH + VERB 1 / WHICH + BE + VERB ing / WHICH + BE + ADJECTIVE. Yurike, you must remember this rule !
2. Indonesian'S Police ---> Police that refer to indonesia / owned by Indonesia
that the position of leadership LEADER in Indonesia
3. ... bring in different meaning (because there are many position, such as manager, mayor, president, and it make the reader confused).
mustn'tMUST NOT always from THE Muslims although ...
4. AVOID TO ABBREVIATE LIKE THIS : mustn't, don't , won't ----> is not formal in academic writing.
but 200,0002,000,000 Muslims protested (...) of Jakarta on AT 4th NovemberNOVEMBER 4TH, 2016
5. Yurike, actually is two million, the TIME IS LYER, wkwkwk (don't obey this suggestion)
6. AT / IN / ON ---> try to study about these words' usage
7. Write date like the English Rule !