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Some people prefer to eat in the food stand or restaurants
However, other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home because they are want eats fresh food and keep health their body
double verbs
To me your essay is understand enough, also you have plenty of idea. Try not to translate from your origin language to English in order to make your writing more mature. Overall, keep writing even though you made mistakes for several times. A quote that I like best said " falling for seven wake up for eight" : D