IELTS Task 1 General: Job application for a waiter position

You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.

Dear Mr. Moore,

I am Arun. I am writing to express my interest for an evening part-time job as a waiter in your well-established five start hotel "The Breeze International". Hereby, I am sending you my resume in which you can find the details about my previous work experience and the qualification.

Begin a hotel management student; I have a good knowledge about customer's expectations with respect to quality of services provided in the hotels. In addition to that, I have been working as a part-time employee in the hotel "Lee Royal Merdian" as a usher for the past one year where I experienced on, how well to greet the customer in a polite and friendly manner.

Moreover, I have excellent communication skill in both English and French which is an added advantage to rake care of foreign guest to the hotel.

Based on my prior experience and knowledge, I hope that I am well suited for the existing open position in your hotel.

Thanks for considering my application for evening waiter job.

Yours Faithfully,
Arun

Hi Everyone, Kindly help me in identifying my mistakes in my writing. Thanks.

Wish if you combine the two lines as the first one is a bit too short and abrupt;
I am Arun (have your family name as well because this letter should sound a bit formal) and the purpose of my writing to you is to seek an opportunity for an evening part-time job at our hotel as a waiter.



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