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Ielts: job inquiry - guide tourists in you town for a travel company


ganggang 5 / 9 2  
May 28, 2014   #1
You heard there is a job to guide tourists in you town for a travel company. Write a letter to the company. In your letter,

1. How (where) you heard about this job
2. Why you think you are suitable for this job
3. Ask some questions about this job
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for this great job, tour guide, and to see if it is possible for you to provide me with more details regarding to this job.

I am a university graduate and I got to know this job opportunity from a local newspaper that I read last week. I believe that I am the most suitable candidate for this position. Firstly, I have been living in this city for many years. Therefore, I am quite familiar with the places and tour attractions. Secondly, I have developed good culture capacity from my previous units at the university so that I am able to communicate with tourists from different backgrounds more efficiently. Moreover, I would like to inquire salary and duties of this position so that could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on these aspects?

Finally, I can guarantee the truthfulness of all that I have said about myself and please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions.

Your Sincerely,
Matt.
SalMon 27 / 113 10  
May 29, 2014   #2
Actually I find this letter very clearly organized. However I thought we should provide our general information before inquiring the job details? Or am I wrong?
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jun 5, 2014   #3
Your Sincerely,
Matt.

Well, you are applying for a job, be it part time or full time and therefore this letter should fall into the formal category. So, this is how you should end a formal letter;

Your faithfully,
Matt Norman
( you need to sign with the full name there as it is important for the employer)

I am writing to apply for this great job, tour guide, and to see if it is possible for you to provide me with more details regarding to this job.

Here too, you better refer to the source that you found about this job vacancy in the first sentence of your letter.
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Jun 12, 2014   #4
also, you need to put space between paragraphs to show the differences between them


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