Jokowi congratulated the United States President-elect, Donald J. Trump

President of Indonesia, Joko "Jokowi" Widodo congratulated the United States President-elect, Donald J. Trump on Wednesday a few hours after the full result of the US election. He said that as the name of Indonesia government and all of people in Indonesia, he congratulated to 45th president-elect of the United States. Furthermore, Jokowi said that Indonesia was ready to continue of mutual diplomatic relationship among both countries. And also he hoped that the mutual cooperation between Indonesia and the United States of America can create serenity and welfare through the world.

As we known that Donald J. Trump was selected as 45th president of United States a few days ago. He won the United States election by 273 electoral votes, while his rival Hillary Clinton just had 218 electoral votes. Donald J. Trump won the election because the United States has a policy that every single person can win the election if they got 270 electoral votes and he got more than that.

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... ready to continue of the mutual diplomatic ...
... and welfare throughout the world.

He won the United States election by 273 ...
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