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Don't judge something from the cover - the most important indication (writing task II)


Saputra Putra 23 / 10 6  
Jan 9, 2016   #1
Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Don't judge something from the cover, this quote means physical appearances can not describe human personality. While this notion leads some proponents to promote identifying someone from their clothes is wrong, others argue clothes mirror human's attitude since character play an important role in picking out some clothes to wear.

There is no doubt that fashion has influenced people's lives in many ways. Consequently, this becomes the main point to indicate what others are like since they believe clothes performs characteristic of some people. Evidence of this can be seen when most companies conduct an employee's enrollment. One of their assessments is clothes since the meaning of this is what candidates wear will show their performance in work. For this reason, this is going wrong since this notion gives rise to over judge and people will believe that clothes are a permanent indicator to identify human personality.

However, there are more convincing arguments in disfavor of such notion. First and foremost, it has been proven that human's personality is influenced by their decision making entire lives, not the clothes. Let takes Bob Sugino as a sample, a well-known Indonesian success person, he never wears formal clothes in their meeting albeit an important conference in which he will only wear a short since he believes clothes have not correlation with his capacity. Therefore, it will become worse if people only judge others with their suit.

In conclusion, it is evident clothes that people wear not important identification what there are like. Society must avoid this indicator since it will cause misunderstanding.

pikul 23 / 26 3  
Jan 9, 2016   #2
... since he believes clothes have notDO NOT HAVE correlation with his capacityCAPACITIES

... it is evident clothes that people wear not important identification what there are like THE WAY THAT PEOPLE DRESS WILL REFLECT WHAT TRULY THEY ARE
vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Jan 9, 2016   #3
Don't judge somethingfrom the A BOOK BY ITS cover, this quote means physical appearances can not describe A human personality. ... to promote identifying someone from their clothes BY THEIR CLOTHING is wrong, others argue clothes mirror A human's attitude since character playS an important role in picking out some clothes to wear.

... Consequently, this becomes the main point to indicate INDICATOR AS TO what others are like since they believe clothes performs characteristic FORMS PART OF THE CHARACTER of some people. Evidence of this can be seen when most IN companies THAT conduct an employee's enrollment ASSESS THEIR EMPLOYEE'S PERFORMANCE. One of their assessments is clothes since the meaning of this is what candidates wear will show WHAT THEY WEAR SEEMS TO AFFECT their performance in AT work. For this reason, this is going wrong THE BELIEF IS WRONG since this notion gives rise to over judge COVER JUDGEMENT and people will believe that ...

However, there are more convincing arguments in disfavor THAT DISAGREE WITH of such notion. First and foremost, it has been proven that human's personality is influenced by their decision making entire lives IN LIFE, not the clothes.

... a well-known Indonesian success person , he never wears formal clothes in their TO A meeting albeit (...) he will only wear a short SHORT PANTS since he believes clothes have not correlation with DO NOT RELATE TO his capacity.

... people only judge others with their suit BASED UPON WHAT THEY ARE WEARING.

... Society must avoid this indicator MISCONCEPTION since it will cause misunderstandingS.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
Jan 12, 2016   #4
Don't judge something from the cover, (...) picking out some clothes to wear.
Read this sample intro:
Clothing is the first, but not the last impression. While it is true to some extent, since most people are being valued by the way they dress, others argue that judging by appearance only tends to create a misleading impression. Therefore, it is agreed that people's characters are reflected in how we behave, not how we dress.

There is no doubt

First and foremost,

They are not linkers or cohesive devices. They are such phrases which a thousand students use in their IELTS essays. This does not impress the examiners at all. I suggest omitting them.

- Let takes FOR EXAMPLE, Bob Sugino as a sample
- he never wears formal clothes in their meeting NEVER DOES HE WEAR WORKING WARDROBES WHEN IT COMES TO OFFICIAL MEETINGS.
albeit an important conference in ...
HE BELIEVES THAT PEOPLE ARE ALLOWED TO WEAR WHAT THEY WANT AS LONG AS THEY DO NOT GET IN TROUBLE FOR IT

In conclusion, it is evident ...
Read this sample conclusion:
In conclusion, people are more likely to wear clothes that can express something about themselves. However, I think people should not judge a person by its appearances, since the true value of a person relies on personality. Where possible, since clothes are often seen as an indicator of a person's persona, it would be nicer to carefully consider selecting wardrobes .


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