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kasfulanwar7 - I want to tell about sport, just my opinion


Kasfulanwar7 1 / -  
Dec 19, 2015   #1
As we know, sport is physical activity that aim to maintain or improve physical ability and make healthy. In spite of that, sport is also a game or competition that play or show complete physical ability or skills. Therefore, sport is physical ability for games that aim to maintain or improve physical ability or skills and can be an entertainment that forms a game or competition.

There are many affiliate of sports that populer and often can be played by people. For example, football, baseball, swimming, fetching, golf, basketball and etc. That sport are famous even most played by people in the world.

Futhermore, sport not only for adult even men and women can exercise it. Any kinds of sport can be played by all of them without seen their ages or gender.

Thus, sport is a game or physical activity that has many affiliate, such as: football, bungee jumping and swimming. More over sports is aim to maintain or improve physical ability, make healthy and can be played by all of people
vangiespen - / 4,134 1449  
Dec 19, 2015   #2
As we know, sportS is ARE physical activity IES that aimS to maintain or improve A PERSON'S physical ability and HELP make A PERSON healthy. In spite of that, sportis also a game or competition SPORTS ARE ALSO GAMES OR COMPETITIONS that ARE playED or showS complete physical ability or skills. Therefore, sportS is physical ability for games that aim to maintain or improve THE physical ability or skills OF PEOPLE AS WELL AS and can be an entertainment that forms a game or competition.

There are many affiliateS of sports that populer ARE POPULAR and often can be played by people. For example, football, baseball, swimming, fetching, golf, basketball and , etc. That sport THOSE SPORTS are famous even most AND played by people in the world.

FuRthermore, sport not only for adult even men and women can exercise it. SPORTS ARE NOT ONLY FOR ADULTS, MEN, OR WOMEN, ANYONE CAN PLAY IT. Any kinds of sport can be played by all of them without seen CONSIDERING their ages or gender.

Thus, sport is a game or physical activity that has many affiliate, such as: football, bungee jumping and swimming. More over sports is aim to maintain or improve physical ability, make healthy and can be played by all of people

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