I'm doing a peer review for this lady but ugh, I don't know how to make it look better.
I got married at the age of sixteen, and ever since I was a child I had this dream to become a lawyer, but I met this guy who's name was Juan and in, he also had his goals. I fell in love, so I married him when he was 18. When we graduated from high school, we both had the opportunity to reach our goals in different ways. He was selected to move to Spain, and I was classified into another education plan. After we analyzed the advantage and the dis advantages, we both agreed that the best way to follow his dream first because he wanted to support his family. Also, we agreed that at the time he reached his goals, that I will be able to follow my dream. However, we knew that we wanted to be together, so we followed his bright opportunity to go and receive his bright opportunity to go and receive his degrees in math and air defense logistics in Spain, Israel and the U.S.
So, what were your opportunities to reach your goals of becoming a lawyer?
Ever since I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a lawyer.[Maybe whoever's writing this can explain why?]Then I fell in love. His name was Juan; he was eighteen and I was sixteen when we married. When we graduated from high school, we both had the opportunity to reach our career goals . I was moved into another education plan. Meanwhile, Juan wanted to study Math and Air Defense Logistics in Spain, Israel, and the U.S., and was elated when ____________ selected him to move to Spain. After we analyzed the advantages and the disadvantages of his leaving (?) , we both agreed that it was better that he follow his dream first so he could support his family. We also agreed that after he reached his goals, that I would be able to pursue mine . But for now , we knew that we wanted to be together, so we when he left, I went with him.
