I don't know how to add more depth into my essay! Help me.

I wrote an essay for our practice exams on Miss Brill written by Katherine Mansfield. The question I wrote my essay on was
"Describe at least ONE method the writer used to help reveal human nature in the written text(s). Explain how this method helped you understand human nature".

*Note: Methods could include characters,events,relationships,narrative point-of-view, language techniques,style.conflicts or structure*

Hi Faith. by coming to use for help, you are showing a desire to develop the best essay that you can submit to your teacher. So, you were provided with the prompt and you have already written your response to it. Why didn't you post the essay here along with your plea for help? We can help you better once you have uploaded your essay to this thread. Don't start a new one, just upload the essay after my response to you. After you do that, we can analyze it for content and use the prompt as a guide in studying you work. It is only then that we can offer solid advice as to how to further improve the content of your response. We will be waiting for the essay because we are eager to help you out.

@Holt
Sorry for the late reply but everything is okay! I've been working really hard lately to try and understand what my English teacher was saying and now I know what she means. Not going to lie , it's still hard to grasp the depth of the essays I've been writing but I've been getting excellence's on the last three practice essays I wrote ( so yay! ) Thank you for trying to help me though! Truly appreciate it :)