jinx 1 / 2 Aug 8, 2013 #1The author's claim that a nation should have the same curriculum is completelysuported . Education untill entering the college must be the same for everycitizen in a country as it helps in a fair competition among the studentsacross the country . As a nation like india contains a large no of states ;if the states are allowed to make the school curriculum then each state wouldhave a different studying pattern which can be a hinderance to the growth ofnation as a whole . Since the students cannot compete when they come togetheron a national level , and the competition might not be fair as it wouldsupport the one's who have studied the courses in their academic's .Consider a country like in india where in the state decides the curriculum until12th standard . So for undergraduate studies students need to give an all indialevel test , thus making the students study differently for the two tests andsophisticating their career . Instead a national curricumlum would be beneficialas it would help them concentrate on a single syllabus thus simplifying the task .Also when the students family travels from one place to another due to transfersin government jobs , they find it difficult to adjust due to the discrepancies inthe syllabi . Hence when competing at a national level students are not judged onthe same platform .However , there must be special rights given to the states so that they can makeadditional subjects available which can be optional and can be managed at the statelevel . In california some subjects realted to the history of the state are made availableso the students can study the culture and tradition of the state they are living in .Thus helping the students grow knowing their culture too .For a nation to develop equally a national curriculum is a must .
holylua 5 / 15 2 Aug 8, 2013 #2Pay specific attention to your spelling. How frustrated it is to read a essay with multiple spelling errors!As a nation like india contains a large no of statesdon't use abbreviation. Since the students cannot compete when they come togetheron a national level , and the competition might not be fair as it wouldsupport the one's who have studied the courses in their academic'sI don't understand your point here. What do you mean by the competition here?lots of spelling errors and bad sentence structures. I don't understand about two tests in the paragraph? It would be great to write more about it
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Aug 10, 2013 #3HiI know you are a newbie here. So I wish to stress on a few forum rules. You need to open this type of essays in the Writing Feedback forum. I found it in Graduate essays and transferred it to the right forum. Also, it is good to mention the purpose (TOEFL, IELTS, GRE etc) of your essay in the topic itself. I guess this is for GRE practicing :)Then, include the prompt in your essay. That helps you earn more relevant comments :)
OP jinx 1 / 2 Aug 10, 2013 #4Hi ,Thanx for your valuable comments. Yes i am practicing for GRE and would like to know more about how to write a better essay ?? Please guide me in writing more better and quality essay !!!
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553 Aug 14, 2013 #5Consider a country like in india where in the state decides the curriculum untilup to the 12th standard.So for undergraduate studies students need to give an all indiaIndia level test , thus making the students study differently for the two tests and sophisticating their careerThis would make students to pass a common national level examination in order to qualify for their undergraduate studies in which they would follow different courses to pursue the major fields of their interest.So for undergraduate studies students need to give an all indialevel test , thus making the students study differently for the two tests andsophisticating their career . Instead a national curricumlum would be beneficialas it would help them concentrate on a single syllabus thus simplifying the task ..... I feel you need to rephrase this part. Your idea does not seem to be flowing logically :(