"Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places."
Laws are created to meet the injustice and find the guilty.These are written documents and enacted once the judicial procedure approves.Every aspects of life including social,economical ,technical and even international follows these laws.If one can make law flexible and rigid accordingly to their on wish it does not meet the objective of the law.People need justice and it fulfill the thirst of the people.
The process of enactment of law varies from country to country.The incidence like Bhopal Gas Tragedy in India and the Chernobyl in Russia ,which world witnessed in recent years has been an examples to those whose victims never got justice till now.Even though there has been huge destruction of life ,infrastructure and environment.The question lies whether the guilty had been punished or not.The victims are still facing the deep disgrace of government and even the compensation they get is very less.
Considering this circumstances the people need justice for their survival .The law can be flexible to meet this injustice.
A recent law had been formulated regarding the saving life in case of any who has met with an accident .Strangers can save the life any one who met an accident in road...Earlier a police complaint had to filled before getting admitted to hospital .As the law makers found saving life is a priority and right of doctors than the report filling by the police ,This flexible holds strong the nature of intimacy of humankind .
Recent movement against corruption in India has witnessed for a failure in law enactment.The corrupted politician's still rule ,once they have been charged for it .The crime has been increased and the intensity of crimes is also at the peak level.The guilty will get a maximum of life term if he kills 1 or 10.The severity of law has a limit .So time has come to change the law for the flexible approach.
As the law need a flexiblity in approach considering the situation, place and time .This flexibilty can cater the hasty enactment and speedy execution providing justice.
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Please let me know how many mark does this can fetch in GRE analytical section
I don't know how you would score on the GRE, because I don't know how it is scored.
I'll give some corrections for you to practice:
Laws are created to uphold justice and punish the guilty.
These are written documents, and they are enacted based on an established judicial procedure.
In this kind of situation, use dashes to manage the long sentence:
Every aspect of life -- social,economic, technical, and even international -- follows these laws.If one can make law flexible and rigid accordingly to their on wish it does not meet the objective of the law.
Here is my assignment for you: Identify the main argument of the essay. Then, change the first sentence of every paragraph so that it helps to show that your main argument is true.
Do not use an apostrophe here: The corrupt politicians still rule, even after they have been charged for their crime. The crime has been increased, and the...
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