IELTS Writing Task 1 Learning Vacations
Now days, there are kinds of trip which is provide a learning vacations. It be more popular because it can make the travelers to enjoy their time off by learning something new. In the past, these types were generally considered for young who learned in the school. But now, the learnng vacations has become more coomon for adults to spend their pastime in educational project, and various types of travel programs be more interest. From this trip, travelers can hone their creative skills on artistic endeavour. However, there are many content which travelers can choose such as photography and dancing to more serious subjects such as history, phylosophy, and literature. It provide much advantage than any types like more economical.
Now days, there are kinds of trip which is ...
Nowadays, a trip becomes more various which is provided with learning on vacation. The travelers will not only enjoy the journey but also learn something new.
In the past, these types were generally [...] of travel programs be more interest.
Previously, such activities was generally presented by pupils who did study tour. Recently, this kind of practice has became trends for many people event for collegers, workers, and private travelers.
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Now day s, there are kinds of trip which is provide (double verb) a learning vacations
Nowadays , there are several kinds of trip which ...
It be is more popula, because it can make ...
From this trip, travelers can hone encourage their creative ...
hone is not strong verb in this topic
However, there are many contents which travelers can choose such (...) such as history, phylosophy philosophy, and literature. It provides much advantages than any types ...
pay attention to countable and uncountable noun.
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