I say that because you have some sentence fragments:
Since love needs sublimity in mind, time, and feelings. While hatred requires nothing but malice and envy.
Usually, incomplete sentences render writing to be far from perfect.
I really do not undersatnd why this sentense is not complete. Anyway, I mean to say that
Not everyone has the ability to love, whereas most people can easily hate! That is because love needs sublimity in mind, time, and feelings, while hatred requires nothing but malice and envy!
That what I meant to say, so if that one is wrong, what is the suggested one?
Are there any other sentences that are incomplete, or not sound good in English? For my teacher told me that it is a literal translation and the native speaker is not going to undersatnd it?
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Thanks indeed for help, and I wil try to be patient, thanks again.