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The level of customer satisfactory in the US when travelled with airplanes


ifraanisa05 44 / 70 6  
Nov 4, 2016   #1
The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000, and 2007.

The bar chart show the level of satisfactory costumer in the US when travelled with airplanes and the table gives information about the percentage of satisfactory aspect in flying experience at surveys in 1999, 2000, and 2007. Overall, most of costumer was fascinated when flying with airplanes which had an upward trend by the following survey years. The reason why people attracted in flying experience was the courtesy of flight attendants

In 1999, 65 percent of correspondent was satisfied in the nation's major airlines was doing. By the next survey, the percentage increased slightly from 69 percent to 72 percent. In contrast, costumer who dissatisfied was a downward trend. Begins at 32 percent in 1999, the percentage went down gradually by 3 percent in the next survey. The last year of survey, the satisfaction levels dipped to 24 percent

The specific aspects of the experiences using airplane was a slight increase among three different years. The ability of flight attendant was the most important aspects for costumer about 92 percent. Flight schedule and courtesy of gate agents became the next important matters for costumer about 88 percent and 79 percent. Prices of tickets was a slight difference from the percentage of schedule's airplane. However, under 47 percent of costumer thought that the seat comfort made them satisfied.
SarlindaDS_27 42 / 52 5  
Nov 4, 2016   #2
Hi @Beauty17 ^_^
Allow me to give you some corrections :)


The bar chart show=> SHOWS the level of satisfactory costumer=>CUSTOMER in the US when travelled=>TRAVELED with airplanes and the ...
Overall, most of costumer=>CUSTOMER was fascinated when ...

In contrast, costumer=>CUSTOMER who dissatisfied was ...

... airplane was a slight increase among=> IN three different years.
... most important aspects for costumer =>CUSTOMER about 92 percent.
... the next important matters for costumer =>CUSTOMER about 88 percent and 79 percent.
However, under 47 percent of costumer =>CUSTOMER thought that ...

Overall you can give your best in your essay but I think it should be better if you don't too much using repetition words such as "customers", use other similar words like passengers or users :)

KEEP WRITING :)
justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Nov 4, 2016   #3
Hi Ifra, before I give you a few suggestions to modify and strengthen your essay, I must remind you of the importance of including the graph or the representation of the analysis, this will make sure that the review is accurate and also a proof of the analysis draft that you made so we can exhaust all there is to enhance your analysis.

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- satisfactorysatisfied costumer in the US when
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- table gives information abouton the percentage
- of satisfactorysatisfaction aspect in flying experience
- at surveys induring 1999, 2000, and 2007.
- Overall, most of costumerswasare fascinated when ...
- whichthat experiencedhad an upward trend
- by the following survey years.
- The reason why people are attracted in flying experience
- wasis the courtesy offrom flight attendants

there you have it Ifra, I hope the above remarks and helpful to your revision.


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