Modern cities such as New York, London, Mexico,etc are optimal places
However, life in an advanced
society is not that
easy as some people expect("think" is a better word in this context)
.In reality, it has some certain disadvantages, including the people(what do you mean? the word "people" is not clear))
, transportation and accomm
One problems that urban residents daily
Because thounsands of people rely on it to reach their destinations such as schools, universities, shopping centers and
offices everyday, it can have an significant effect on their
lifelivesAt the end of each paragraph write a conclusion (reword the topic sentence) for providing a summery of the paragraph.
Another disadvantage exists in a big citiy is the indifferent attitude of its inhabitants ----> Suggestion :"Pluralism can be considered as another negative factor in overpopulated, big cities. In a large city at which various cultures shape the society, some social problems may be created."
Due to the lack in housing, houses and apartment are often so expensive that the poor can hardly afford to buy them. The more centrality of a location , the higher its rent is
it would be better to give an example here and compare the price of housing in a big and small city.
the immigrants from rural areas moving to cities are on the increse, putting the standard of life on pressure.
How it may impact the standard of life. Try to support what you mention in the body. In addition, as I told you above, each paragraph needs a conclusion.