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The essay on life cycle of salmon


kin 1 / 1  
Sep 26, 2013   #1
pls help me to edit my report. Many thanks!
chessman567 5 / 170 11  
Sep 26, 2013   #2
please specify what you have done so far, the prompt, and what you need help with
OP kin 1 / 1  
Sep 26, 2013   #3
chessman567
The diagram illustrates the life of salmon in eight main from releasing egg into the river to mature adult salmon.
The life cycle of the salmon begins when the female adult salmon lay eggs into the river, a process called spwning. After the incubation period, the creatures emerge from the eggs but they are not yet fully formed. Then the baby fishes stay here until they are big enough, they move from the river to the eatuary.

In this stage, the young fishes spend some time in the estuary. Following that, the juveniles migrate to the saltwater of the ocean where they can continue to grow to a mature salmon. At the end of process, many adult salmons migrate back up the estuary to spawning areas.

Overall, we can see a significant thing in this process is there are various stages in the development salmon that begins and ends in the river.
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Sep 30, 2013   #4
The diagram illustrates the life of salmon in eight main from releasing egg into the river to mature adult salmon.

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon fish which consists of eight main stages. The cycle begins from the female salmon releasing eggs into the river and ends up with the formation of mature adult salmons.

The life cycle of the salmon begins when the female adult salmon lay eggs into the river, a process called spwning.

The first stage of salmon's life cycle, the female salmons laying eggs into the river, is called the spawning process.


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