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Not like my expected club; 'Art club is the best club I've joined'



yuarar 1 / -  
May 16, 2014   #1
I've always wanted to take up an artistic hobby, and I finally got the chance! There is new club at my school. I wanted to join the art club because I love art like drawing and painting. I was wondering how fun and amazing my new club. I can meet someone who have the same interest.

I was so excited about this club. But the club wasn't like what I expected. We didn't do anything special, just laid back because the teacher was so busy. She always delayed the meeting. It's ok if just once or twice but she delayed the meeting more than 3 weeks.

I tried to be patient. I was very happy because I met some interesting people. They helped me to develop my creativity. They were so good. And after 3 weeks, we started the club as it should be. Art club is the best club I've joined.
Pahan 1 / 1787  
May 17, 2014   #2
I wanteddecided to join the art club because I love art like drawing and painting. appreciate all forms of art, especially painting.

I was wondering how fun and amazing my new club. I can meet someone who have the same interest.

I was wondering what an amazing this new experience would be when I would be among many others who too share the same passion and interest as mine.

It's ok if just once or twice but she delayed the meeting more than 3 weeks.

It would have been tolerable had she delayed the meeting once or twice, but she did that for more than three weeks.


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