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Do you like reading?


Ngoc Mai 1 / 2  
Aug 14, 2015   #1
I'm quite keen on reading. But in particular, I'm really into reading newspaper in the Internet. Some kind of newspaper which I often read is about economic, finance and banking. The reason is because they provide me with actual knowledges which I don't learn at may school. In addition, I also adore reading comic book, novel because they help me ralax and not be bored in my free time. Although, I like reading, I don't have time to read regularly.

TerriVu 1 / 2 1  
Aug 14, 2015   #2
I'm quite keen on reading. But in particular, I'm really into reading newspaper inon the Internet. Some kind of newspaper which I often read isare about economics, finance and banking. The reason is becausethat they provide me with actualpractical knowledges which (I don't learn at ma y school) is not taught at schools. In addition, I also adore reading comic books, novels because they help me raelax and not be bored in my free time. (Although, I like reading, I don't have time to read regularly) You should talk positively "In spite of my tight schedule, I always read books whenever I have a chance."

I hope this would help you.
OP Ngoc Mai 1 / 2  
Aug 14, 2015   #3
@TerriVu Thank you :))
EF_Carol - / 145 39  
Aug 14, 2015   #4
It's hard to judge one paragraph, but I'll try!

I'm quite keen on reading.

You could start buy posing the question, or restating it. Do I like reading?

Although I like reading...

You could conclude by reiterating the kind of reading you like. Although I like reading Internet newspapers and comic books...

You need to check your spelling, too.

All in all a good try, but needs a little work on the intro and conclusion and spelling. Try introducing the topic by repeating the question. Then repeat your answer at the end by including what you read. Try a spellcheck, or dictionary.

ef _carol


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