Please avoid posting exterior links in your messages. You could have easily cut and paste the question into your thread but you did not do so. Instead, you violated forum rules:
- Do not post exterior links which are considered direct advertising for other websites at our forum
- Do not post exterior links that may contain malware and other security threat potentials for our forum users
You were given a second chance by the moderators of this forum which is why you will be receiving advice from me.
The essay will receive an automatic failing TA score because you wrote less than the required 150 word minimum. This will result in points deductions based on word count. This will applied prior to the sectional scoring considerations. Such deductions could result in an overall failing score.
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Avoid the use of English slang words. Stick to academic writing references for proper tone and analysis presentation.
Try to use a uniform sentence presentation in the reporting paragraphs. These should be uniform at 3-5 sentences each so that you will easily assure yourself of meeting the word count.