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The line graph depicts changes in the rate of share price in Outokumpu companies - task 1


amrillahmk31 15 / 17 2  
Jan 18, 2016   #1
The line graph depicts changes in the rate of share price in Outokumpu companies and is measured in euros over 5-year period. Overall, it can be seen that the figure for Outokumpu's stock price gradually increased at the first term (2006-middle of 2008: January to June), which hit a high at the end of 2006. Subsequently, up to the midst of 2008, the line graph saw a fluctuation, which was followed by steep decline and hit a low at the end of 2008. Then, in the rest of period, the line graph gradually rose.

Initially, Outokumpu stock price stood at 13 euros per sheet, then at the end of 2006, it reached a peak virtually at 32 euros per sheet. After which, until the beginning of 2008, the stock price gradually decreased, but then continued to increase steadily until the midst of 2008, which touched 30 euros per sheet. Furthermore, up to this point, outukumpu's share price was still stable even though there were some fluctuation.

In the second term (middle of 2008: July to Desember - 2010), Outokumpu's share price jumped sharply to around 7 euros which was known that it hit a low of Outokumpu's share price. Afterwards, outukumpu's stock price fluctuated once more until the end of period in 2010. Finally, at the end of period in 2010, it can also be noticed that Outokumpu's stock price did not change much from starting point in 2006 and finished in 2010.




erin24 12 / 13  
Jan 18, 2016   #2
The line graph depicts changes in the rate of share ...

This introducton can devide into 2 sentences. Ex:

The line graph depicts changes in the rate of share price in Outokumpu companies. The values were measured in euros over 5-year period.

Furthermore, up to this point, o (O )utukumpu's share price was (...) were some fluctuation(s ).

Mr. Amril, please notice about the function of capital letter. Outukumpu is the name of city, because of that you should use capital letter.


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