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period of 30 years.
Inclusive of? Summarize the dates and other information. This paragraph is incomplete and lacking information. There is more information than this highlight in the image. How was the graph divided ? Into what groups?
What was the best trend reference?
Your paragraphs are not showing a proper and complete analysis. That is done using 3-5 sentence ppresentations per paragraph.
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