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what would we do to live longer?


hivarasti 2 / 3  
Jul 17, 2011   #1
living longer is more beautiful or living happily?
today we want to live longer I think.becuase most of us have strong wishes and want to achive them.
In this way you do every works and perform but generally forget your purpose.maybe lose your time, money, or maybe your family.

living happily is more funy but spend very fast.you can do all kind of perform to live longer.

hvthoteen 16 / 44 4  
Jul 18, 2011   #2
i think your should pronouce better before trying to write
i even don't know what you are writing
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Jul 20, 2011   #3
In order to help the essayist, we need to type the sentence the correct way.

Hivarasti, practice typing this 10 times.

Is living longer more beautiful, or living happily more beautiful?
Today, we want to live longer, I think, because most of us have strong wishes and want to achieve them.
In this way you work and perform but generally forget your purpose. Maybe lose your time, money, or even your family.
Living happily is more fun, but we spend our years very fast. You can do a lot of healthy things to live longer.

Parctice that way! you will gain the good English habits.

:-)


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