Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life.To what extent do you agree.
Living a healthy lifestyle through eating the right kinds of food is a wealth to a person.I strongly agree that a complete nutritious diet is very important to have a healthy lifestyle.
A balanced diet is mainly comprised
vegatables,fruits,proteins and carbohydrates.These provides vitamins and minerals which are very important for the normal function of the body.Without these,the body is
weak and is not able to perform its duty.Eating the right kind of food prevents malnutrition.
In fact malnutrition could lead to alot of illnesses which is a threat to one's life.A regular intake of a balanced diet helps fight viruses and bacteria from multiplying inside the body and eventually revutalize and restore the health of a person.
Moreover,f a person is always revitalize by the right kinds of food that he eats,this could eventually prolong his life because he will not be easily infected with diseases.In addition,having a long and healthy life could strengthen the relationship of a person to another.This would also encourage other people to eat a healthy diet in order to live long.
To conclude,eating a balanced diet is vital t a long and healthy life so it is very important to eat the right kinds of food regularly.
weak and is not able to perform its duty
Moreover,f a person is always
revitalize by the right kinds of food
Must be revitalized
not revitalize right?
In addition,having a long and healthy life could strengthen the relationship of a person to another
... could strengthen any of his relationship.
Basically, I think your essay is a little bit short. Maybe provide some more reasonings and example could be better?
Feel free to reply to my feedback :D
Oh i see...thank you very much for the corrections...:)
.I strongly agree that a complete nutritious diet is very important to have a healthy lifestyle.
Well, your prompt says -
Eating a balanced diet isthe most important factor for a healthy life.
... there is a difference between "very important" and "the most important" . When you say "very important" it can be one of the very important factors, but when you say "the most important", then it should come on top of all other important factors... You need to maintain a good alignment between your writing and essay prompt.
Thank you very much for taking time to do corrections..il check again
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Thank you so much