Hallo Adhisty,
My name is Asep Rudi, I would like to give you some advice concerning your essay.
Here are some suggestions from me :
On the other hand, people who live in countryside cannot avoid the disadvantage. They are hard to use the advanced technology or to afford communication well in sight of the limited signal. As an example, not all places can catch high signal of the internet or mobile phone. Therefore, there is a challenge in making decision to stay in small villages nowadays.
Actually, your idea is very good. However, regarding this paragraph, you have shown as an example. In my opinion, it will be better if you mention the name of areas where it is. For example, you can incorporate one of villages located in some countries. It will create your essay become more scientific. Readers will get information.
A study shows that people in a village will be fast to give first aid with friendly behavior when their neighbors obtain the problems
This is also require some places where the study was taken. I believe that every research will mention the place,
Good luck for your essay,
I hope you can get your best score on your essay.
Best regards,
Asep Rudi Casmana