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The logging industry affects the environment in a number of negative ways.


Herlysa 1 / 2  
Oct 11, 2016   #1
The logging industry gives many negative effects to environment. Those are the wild broken, contaminating air, and unstability weather. That effect will be happened in land and water.

Trees have parts of their body that can give life to all creature in the word. The parts of their body will devide two part. There are stick and root. The sticks including leaves give a home to all animals because they can life or stay there. The root decrease scraping of ground. More over, the root of trees which plant in side river will push the developing algae. So the wild is not break.

Trees have leaven that change carbon dioxide to oxygen. The trees can be filtered air. The trees decrease contaninating air. More over, the good air gives positive side to atmosphere. If oxygen is more then carbon dioxide, the weather will be stable. Oxygen and weather have strong relation. The much oxygen is, the more stable the weather is.

Wooden is important to preserve a natural resource because wooden give a life to all creaturs in this world.
PHA2016 39 / 62 4  
Oct 11, 2016   #2
Hello herlysa,

The logging industry gives gave many negative ...

Those are were the wild broken, ... (use past tense because you cited from another source)

The trees decreased contaninating air.

Wooden is was important to (...) because wooden it wasgive gave a life to all ... [avoid repetition ]

NB: you should be careful in your tenses

hope these help


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