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'long term investing vs. short term investing' - Clep Exam Composition

Cajamez 1 / 2  
May 5, 2012   #1
I am extremely glad to have found this site. Thanks in advance for all the help. This is a timed, 30 minute trial essay for an upcoming clep exam. Please be honest, and share your opinions. Thanks.

Topic: State which type of investing between day trading and long term is better and why. Give reasons for why you think one is better than the other.

Long term investing has much more advantages than day trading in many ways. I will attempt to propagate why I think this is a much more suitable way of investing for the average investor.

Primary reason in my opinion for long term investing as a way of investments are the tax benefits given. With the opportunity of holding investments for a little over a year and receiving the benefits of a lower tax rate, it's very easy to see why professional money manager and longer term investors do so much better than day traders do.

Take for instance someone like Warren Buffet, who has shown over a long period of time, a prolonged discipline in holding on to good companies, sometimes for decades, this discipline have proven to been very beneficial to Warren Buffet and his shareholders.

Long term investing gives you a sense of ease, if you invest in great companies, you don't have the added stress of wondering what's going on with you investment capital as much. Stress is alleviated by doing detailed research about the companies, value, stability and over solvency before capital is risked. Once capital is at risk one can be assured that the investment can be held for long term, thus assuming long capital gains.

Capital is better allocated if it is not depleted by much turn portfolio/trading activity turnarounds. Paying too much commission is the fastest way for depleting capital; to many young, and old investors, are lured to the making and taking profits that are generated quickly, over looking the longer term picture in the process. This leads to much higher tax burdens and an overall depletion of investment capital in the short run.

The desire to make money quickly is very tempting and has an adrenal flow about it, but erringly deceiving as well. Being told stories of investors (more like speculators) investing $1000, $5,000 or $10,000 and parleying it to a $100,000 or $1000,000 in a short spaces of time, is very much the norm on TV and Internet advertising. The trouble with these advertising ideas, are we are not told of the countless destructive evaporation to wealth by these "get rich quick schemes" create. Whereas, learning how to diligently invest and being patient, has proven to have great rewards.
OP Cajamez 1 / 2  
May 5, 2012   #2
Please share ideas as I prepare for a Clep College Composition. Thanks.

Topic: What does Paul mean in Roman Chapter 2: Verse 1; explain, include quotes from chapter 2 verses 1 - 13.

Paul in this chapter is talking about man's way of judging another man based up his own understanding. This type of judgment very misleading since man by nature of flesh is sinful in more ways than one, and unable to judge with a fair sense of equity and justice.

As Paul asserts "O man, that judgest them which do such things, and doest the same" here is clearly addressing the hypocrisy of judging deeds with a false sense of fairness while being the participant of the same sin or crime. The scripture teaches that God is the only just and fair judge, and man should use caution in his desire to act on God's behalf in being a judge. Paul shows that "[don't you know] that the goodness of God leadeth thee to repentance?" A call here for man each to take note of himself and how he goes about dealing with his fellowman.

Paul further claims "[that] tribulations and anguish, upon every soul of man that doeth evil." In these beautiful and powerful words, Paul is show the equality with which God's judgment holds true, as God show no favoritism in sin and evil. The sentence in the verse "Therefore thou are inexcusable, O Man" is a power and active (inexcusable) upon the subject of man, and wants it to be know without equivocation.

In verse 7 Paul explains "to them who by patient, continuance in well doing, seek for glory and honor and immortality, eternal life" this is the great alternative to being an unjust judge, and reflect beautifully on the humble soul of man who is slow to judge and patient to eternity.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
May 9, 2012   #3
Long term investing has muchmany more advantages than day trading in many ways. I will attempt to propagate why I think this is a much more suitable way of investing for the average businessman/woman . (you don't want to over-use the term "invest, investor" in a single sentence, or paragraph.) It will flow more nicely this way.

Capital is better allocated if it is not depleted by many activity turnarounds.
I made a few revisions; overall this is great! I especially appreciate your closing statements. Very true, and good job!
OP Cajamez 1 / 2  
May 11, 2012   #4
30 minutes is a rush for creating these essays. I appreciate your response.

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